Clear to see how your product uses, develops and challenges conventions. Good discussion on the use of micro-elements, MES and character representation of your work which is supported well by existing media products and relevant theory which is drawn upon. I like the way you discuss how you tried to challenged the idea of the 'Male Gaze'. Proficient skill in the choice of form in which to present the evaluation question as it is detailed where required as well as illustrative too. Proficient ability to communicate.
-ensure that you highlight the music video that you are comparing to -be a little clearer as to when you are using, developing and challenging real media products
Clear to see how your product uses, develops and challenges conventions. Good discussion on the use of micro-elements, MES and character representation of your work which is supported well by existing media products and relevant theory which is drawn upon. I like the way you discuss how you tried to challenged the idea of the 'Male Gaze'. Proficient skill in the choice of form in which to present the evaluation question as it is detailed where required as well as illustrative too. Proficient ability to communicate.
ReplyDelete-ensure that you highlight the music video that you are comparing to
-be a little clearer as to when you are using, developing and challenging real media products