There is a proficient understanding here on the combination of your main product and ancillary texts. There is also a proficient understanding of the forms and conventions used in digipaks and music adverts which you identify. It is clear to see that drafting took place which helped you develop your final ideas. Each product is effective in complimenting your video. ICT used well here.
-some repetition when you discuss drafting -what did you find from your comparable products? Did you develop any ideas from your research here? -Draft 1 and 2 of the advert are very similar...
There is a proficient understanding here on the combination of your main product and ancillary texts. There is also a proficient understanding of the forms and conventions used in digipaks and music adverts which you identify. It is clear to see that drafting took place which helped you develop your final ideas. Each product is effective in complimenting your video. ICT used well here.
ReplyDelete-some repetition when you discuss drafting
-what did you find from your comparable products? Did you develop any ideas from your research here?
-Draft 1 and 2 of the advert are very similar...